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Unit 4 WK 6 Wimpy, Skimpy Paragraphs (Collaborative)
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Unit 4 WK 6 Wimpy, Skimpy Paragraphs (Collaborative)

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For this assignment, you will be working in your cohort to hone your paragraph development and coherence skills.

Unit 4 WK 6 Collaboration
Revising Wimpy, Skimpy Paragraphs (Paragraph Development and Coherence)

Directions:

  1. Click the Text Icon Feature and choose a color for your font. Type your name onto the document in that color.
  2. Choose a skimpy or wimpy paragraph from Essay 1 or another previous writing assignment.
  3. Revise the paragraph to include more development of the point and improved coherence.
  4. Share both the original and revised paragraphs in your group cohort by typing it in your chosen color.
  5. In parentheses after your revised paragraph, explain what you did to better develop this paragraph.
  6. Please also elect one member to upload your cohort's final collaborative document to Assignments (one assignment upload per cohort).



Example:
Blue = Susie Student

Original paragraph:
Need Example from Hacker guide

Revised paragraph:

(I elaborated upon _____.  I also added details regarding _______________)


Click on the following link to access the Collaborative document that has already been set up for your cohort:  Unit 4 Week 6 Wimpy, Skimpy Paragraphs Collaborative.

 

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