Unit 4 WK 6 Wimpy, Skimpy Paragraphs (Collaborative)
- Due No Due Date
- Points None
- Submitting a file upload
For this assignment, you will be working in your cohort to hone your paragraph development and coherence skills.
Unit 4 WK 6 Collaboration
Revising Wimpy, Skimpy Paragraphs (Paragraph Development and Coherence)
Directions:
- Click the Text Icon Feature and choose a color for your font. Type your name onto the document in that color.
- Choose a skimpy or wimpy paragraph from Essay 1 or another previous writing assignment.
- Revise the paragraph to include more development of the point and improved coherence.
- Share both the original and revised paragraphs in your group cohort by typing it in your chosen color.
- In parentheses after your revised paragraph, explain what you did to better develop this paragraph.
- Please also elect one member to upload your cohort's final collaborative document to Assignments (one assignment upload per cohort).
Example:
Blue = Susie Student
Original paragraph:
Need Example from Hacker guide
Revised paragraph:
(I elaborated upon _____. I also added details regarding _______________)
Click on the following link to access the Collaborative document that has already been set up for your cohort: Unit 4 Week 6 Wimpy, Skimpy Paragraphs Collaborative.